Checkmate
Rating: 86.40 Perspectives: 5 Votes: 35 2007-03-30 15:46:42 Style: Thriller/Drama Number of pages: 9 You must be logged in to start kibosh Perspective Reward Points: 124
Carousel Reward Points: 0 Log Line: What if your life is taken away because you questioned the meaning of life? Would you accept your fate, or would you open the box? Production Notes: |
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Posted by: Sistine 2008-04-13 21:00:57 Vague, yet entrancing Concept: 19 Dialogue: 15 Presentation: 18 Plot: 19 Intriguing. With this, you've taken an age-old metaphor--about pawns and the game of life--and given it a new meaning, in a sense. This has left me with much to contemplate, but I implore you for the vigor in which you put this forth.
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