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Log Line:

Two people never see each other's faces but they're connected by two unlikely items.

Production Notes:

Seems I'm on a blossom roll. Wrote this one a while ago... last summer I think.

Latest Perspective on But for a Blossom

Well...just exactly what was that about?

I gained the impression that the woman in the poem was being held captive by the blossom, and yet was using it as bait so someone could then save her.

This poem really does border onto the surreal, though that isn't a bad thing as I enjoyed reading it, I'm just slightly bemused as to the meaning behind it.

There were a few instances where I thought the rhythm was a bit off, but that's only if I get really nit picky and pedantic with it.