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Pull the Trigger
Rating:
88.39
Perspectives: 3
Votes: 18
Sistine's Avatar
Posted by: Sistine
2008-02-16 15:05:36
Style: Political/War
Number of pages: 3
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Log Line:
How can an executioner kill someone who merely seeks salvation?
Production Notes:
Inspired and adept. I hope you enjoy.
Past Revisions:
2008-02-16 14:59:33
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Lindione's Avatar
Posted by: Lindione
2008-03-12 16:05:46
Thought-Provoking
Overall:
87
 
 
 
 
 
You really do bring the characters to life in this poem and really detailed. I could see little flaw in the poem except maybe word choice could be a little more detailed. You made a very good story out of this and express the viewpoints very well.

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